Little snippets of bad writing, with commentary on why they're bad. Please suggest more to me @katebevan
A truly dreadful review. I lost count of the number of mixed metaphors, and then the writer praises the video quality but goes on to say it's shit. Er, WTF?
Their wedding was in a castle in Scotland: three days of games, teas and horseback riding, and a singular gesture of love by the groom. “We were having a cocktail on the lawn after the ceremony, and Alasdhair was making a toast, and he said, ‘I’d like to announce a new addition to our family.’ So we all thought she was pregnant,” Paltrow, a bridesmaid, recounted. “And then out from this row of trees comes this thoroughbred horse. Everyone burst into tears.” Later, the bride and groom — she ha...
"Initially starting in Muscat, several towns and their nearby attractions were visited including Niswah, Al Jabal Al Akhdar, Sur and Salalah where the race finished. The teams visited attractive villages with simple irrigation systems, caves filled with amazing rock formations, museums, palaces, the impressive Wadi Shab and traditional Omani boat building yards."