Fun learning idea (paint in a bag is good for drawing and practicing letters). Great idea for clean freak moms! LOVE this!
I wish the subhead were in a different color (I have trouble with blues/purples). Making your writing easy to read in a visual sense is important too! That said, I like what they wrote here: It's good advice. The "read aloud" test for good writing is an excellent one! (Or, in the case of writing headlines, do the "breath test." If you can't say it all in one breath: It's too long.).