Avoid using the word 'very' because it's lazy. A man is not very tired, he is exhausted. Don't use the word very sad, use morose. Language was invented for one reason, boys-to woo women-and, in that endeavor laziness will not do.
"No one is going to make my dreams come true for me. it is my job to get up every day and work toward the things that are deepest in my heart.and to enjoy every step of the journey rather than wishing I was already where I want to end up.