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I wish the subhead were in a different color (I have trouble with blues/purples). Making your writing easy to read in a visual sense is important too! That said, I like what they wrote here: It's good advice. The "read aloud" test for good writing is an excellent one! (Or, in the case of writing headlines, do the "breath test." If you can't say it all in one breath: It's too long.).