When you elaborate, you STOP THE ACTION and observe. Use your five senses. Write a 3-5 sentence elaborative segment of this animal character. Tell what you saw, felt, heard, and smelled. Tell about its color, size, behavior and how it moved. Do you know what this character is feeling? How do you know? Do NOT write a grocery list! Use interesting words and make it entertaining.
The Love Of A Mother - I can never comprehend how people can delight in killing deer. I have witnessed the lustful joy of the hunters who kill deer even in protected camping areas and sanctuaries. Animalistic men.."without natural affection" 2 Tim. 3:1-5