How to Teach Descriptive Writing with Show me Sentences - This is like the "Box and Explode" - where I have students find a sentence that needs to 'show' more in a story, they box it, then explode it! I like the strategy explained in this article and will use it independent of their story to help students learn how to do it before applying it!!!!!
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Here is everything you will need to teach your students how to write a personal narrative aligned with the Writing Common Core Standards for grades 3-5. $
Writing Practice -- Correct These Sentences for Kindergarten! I will be adding more to this pack over the summer. I use these for morning work and writing center practice. Kids correct mistakes with conventions and sight word spelling.