"I saw lots of awesome, really cool animals on my trip." This is a BORING beginning. Write a 1-3 sentence beginning using an action, question/exclamation, thought/feeling, or sound. Use descriptive language, and put your reader right at the beginning of the action.
And I wonder where they found the camera? SEE blog - https://www.pinterest.com/pin/368943394455164185/ | Teino's technicality re dissimulitide of "t" a.k.a walking tree q' - https://www.pinterest.com/pin/368943394454479111/ are at - https://www.pinterest.com/pin/368943394454924759/ | face: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/368943394455105030/ | p2p - Rio: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/368943394455136107/
i simply like pictures from all sorts of things.the pictures i blog here are not mine. i found them here on tumblr or all over the internet. if you see your picture here and it is not linked to you or you want to be credited, please contact me =)>